Little Green Riding Hood
Once upon a time there lived a little girl in the forest. Her mum called her Little Green Riding Hood.
One day she had to get some magic soup to her Grandmother. Suddenly an invisible girl came out of a teleporter and she said to Little Green Riding Hood, “where is the castle in the forest?” But Little Green Riding Hood did not say a word to Little Invisible Riding Hood but took her into the teleporter and she went to a different planet.
Away she did not know how to get away from the planet but a wizard did a magic spell and made a teleporter. Little Green Riding Hood jumped into the teleporter and she went back to the castle in the forest.
Then Little Invisible Riding Hood came back to get revenge. A witch came out of the teleporter and versed the wizard. The witch did a dark spell on the wizard. The wizard did a light spell on the witch and Little Green Riding Hood came out of the castle and versed Little Invisible Riding Hood.
Little Green Riding Hood threw her magic basket at Little Invisible Riding Hood then Little Invisible Riding Hood threw her invisible basket at Little Green Riding Hood.
The wizard destroyed the witch. The witch was only pretending she was dead and flew away on her magic broom to her house in Candyland. After that Little Green Riding Hood did a magic spell with her magic basket. Little Invisible Riding Hood flew in the teleporter and she never came back out, and that is the end of the story.
By Leroy
My Reflection
1 comment:
Leroy, I really enjoyed reading your fractured fairytale. You enjoyed our Fairytales unit and this shows in the imaginative elements in your story. You are working well towards the learning intention which was to rewrite a known fairy tale using the elements of narrative writing. You used the success criteria to help you create an entertaining fairytale. I particularly like how you added a twist on the original fairytale by including a teleporter and a different planet! Wow, you have really used your imagination. Your next step is to work on including more language features such as similes in your writing and to check that your writing is sequences correctly and makes sense as I helped you with that when you published.
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